Score: 10

"BEAUTIFUL!!!"

submission: There she is!!!

date: July 18, 2006

That was adorable! I loved it!! You should shoot for a proffesional animation career if you aren't already doing so! You have talent!

Only thing I can suggest is to shine up the preloader and maybe, MAYBE get some English music. It doesn't really matter though.

Score: 9

":D Adorable!"

submission: Everyday

date: July 15, 2006

You've got some real talent! That made me melt inside; it was so cute!

The graphics were amazing the story was so great and I loved it. The only thing I would suggest is for maybe some more english text, or like a subtitle, you know?

Anyway, good job.

Score: 9

"Great!"

submission: A Simple Line 8

date: July 14, 2006

This was great, but I don't understand BBQ's lack of effort. In SL7 he was astonishing, and in the alpha I saw his revamped pig, and I thought it was going to be great, but all he had was an poorly put together elephant skit which frankly, I could have done better.

Either way, BBQ did a good job, just not as good of a job. Loved the skulls, loved the crazy stuff, good work all. It's obvious that you guys have some real talent, and you should be truely, greatly proud!

Score: 10

"Great!"

submission: Time Squad [Part 1]

date: July 12, 2006

The combination of all your great graphics, sounds and story really does deserve a ten! It was so long, so great!

I LOVE IT!

Score: 8

"Above Par for a sprite"

submission: Mario Brothers - Part V

date: July 8, 2006

You seem talented, and you really should venture into the world of vectors. Sprites are crap. Anyways...

GOOD:
- Very nice custom tweening
- Storyline good
- Lengthly
- Engaging
- Nice fight scenes
- Nice font

BAD:
- 'Utilize' is run off of word, 'Use'. Don't say utilize, it is only good in rare, rare occasions. Every single time you wrote Utilize, you should have written 'Use'.
- SPRITES!!!
- You mixed vectors with sprites.
- No voices, just writing
- Poor buttons, try adding some transparency, like a 0-Alpha white square behind the button (nested within it of course), and they'll be easier to click!

Good job, a solid 8.

Score: 9

"Yay!"

submission: My US of Whateva!

date: June 28, 2006

It's great to see more from you guys, this was awesome! It had the graphics, sound quality and feel for a great music video, and of course great music.

You really should go Flash 8 sometime, it's much better and for this the Runtime Bitmap Cache'ing would be great to reduce lagg.

:D thumbs up!

Score: 7

"Wow!"

submission: Run Joe! Run!

date: June 28, 2006

I've seen that done before with stickmen but this is totally innovative! That was great! Such a good idea, and I havn't really ever seen anything like it!

Wee! That was cool!

Score: 3

"Very subtle"

submission: The Sun's Lonely Tears

date: June 28, 2006

This was good for a first try, but you really should submit that other stuff. Chances are it was too big because the sounds were not streamed.

I think the clouds should move slower, you should stream the sound, get rid of that crappy quality on the sun, better clouds, and make it more clear to the audience whats going on, and perhaps even personalize the sun more with more human features (like eyes).

nice try though!

Score: 9

"Wow!"

submission: Joan and Mark

date: June 28, 2006

That was amazing!! I think it was better than Maxwell Edison, but that's just me. I spotted some flaws though...

BAD:
- The Newgrounds preloader was pixelated. You can download a vector version from the site, so why is it so crappy?!
- The music was not in english. Eh, not that big of a deal, but I'd prefer english.

GOOD:
- Great art, a bit sketchy
- AMAZING animation! Great stuff
- Some great length
- Cool story, why only one arm? Cool stuff...
- Great 'southern' colours
- Yup

Cool!! :D

Score: 8

"That was GREAT!"

submission: Watermelon Head 1-5

date: June 25, 2006

...but it stops being funny after you watch it about 15 times. Work on that.