Score: 9

"Wow!"

submission: Joan and Mark

date: June 28, 2006

That was amazing!! I think it was better than Maxwell Edison, but that's just me. I spotted some flaws though...

BAD:
- The Newgrounds preloader was pixelated. You can download a vector version from the site, so why is it so crappy?!
- The music was not in english. Eh, not that big of a deal, but I'd prefer english.

GOOD:
- Great art, a bit sketchy
- AMAZING animation! Great stuff
- Some great length
- Cool story, why only one arm? Cool stuff...
- Great 'southern' colours
- Yup

Cool!! :D

Score: 8

"That was GREAT!"

submission: Watermelon Head 1-5

date: June 25, 2006

...but it stops being funny after you watch it about 15 times. Work on that.

Score: 5

"Dude..."

submission: Fott

date: June 25, 2006

If you didn't make it don't submit it! That means it is stolen.

Score: 5

"Could be better."

submission: The n00b Guide

date: June 13, 2006

It is a refreshing look at what tutorials SHOULD look like, and it was good, but could be improved.

- Music
- The next/back buttons should always be in the same place, so you don't have to move your cursor every new frame
- At one point, the title changed colours for 1 frame for no reason

I didn't read the whole thing because I wouldn't benefit from it, but I am sure it was quality!

GOOD JOB!

Score: 2

"That wasn't right."

submission: A simple weapon tutorial2

date: June 13, 2006

Tracing weapons isn't okay. Just tracing everything shows no artistic talent, and makes for very, very bad movies / games.

Teaching people to trace is like teaching people to steal and should not be in a tutorial.

Score: 8

"I got to level 28 and got bored."

submission: 3d logic

date: June 2, 2006

<a very challenging and unique game>

Graphics: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 |9| 10
<this is very sharp and modern>

Sound: |0| 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
<add a sound loop and you strongly deserve an overall 9>

Interactivity: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 |9| 10
<very nice game, but no save function>

Style: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 |9| 10
<a very unique game that I have never seen before, and totally brilliant>

Voilence: |0| 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
<no comment>

Humor: |0| 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
<no comment>

Overall: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 |8| 9 10

<you just need sound and a save function, but otherwise good job>

Score: 9

"Wow Intense"

submission: Project I.V.

date: June 2, 2006

That was great it reminded me of that birthday cartoon Luis made.

GOOD:
- Preloader sufficient
- Nice build up to the actual brawl
- Fighting was amazing
- Good ending
- Nice tweening+FBF combo
- Good animation and Graphics All around.

BAD:
- SMALL bit of lagg
- No dialogue (but that doesn't really matter)
- The one closeup scene during the brawl was lower quality than the rest.

Thats it. GOOD JOB!!!

Score: 9

"I LOVED it."

submission: Ignorance is Bliss

date: June 2, 2006

OMG that was so much fun. Though I've got some gripe I gotta get outta the way...

BAD:
- The mouthing was ok, of course the two mouth movements you did were great, but the mouths lacked variety, those two lip movements you did were overused.
- Epilepsy warning on that scene where his eyes are flsahing. Slow that down.
- Preloader was stingy.

That being said...

GOOD:
- Animation and Art were fantabulosioustastic.
- SONG WAS SO GOOD. LUV.
- That was funny.
- A great combo of sound and animation, and so greatly synchronized.
- FUN OVER ALL.

Yup that's that I love you.

<3

Score: 9

"SPECTACULAR!"

submission: Fantasy-Korea-[Episode2]

date: June 2, 2006

This submission opened my eyes to how good 3D animation really can be.

GOOD:
- Solid 3D animation, and great animation all around.
- Great sounds.
- Nice preloader it ran smooth.
- So fun, with all the action.

BAD:
- PLZ CORRECT ME IF I'M WRONG, but I those were rotoscopes (I think).
- Newgrounds is an English site, so I would have prefferred English music.
- The text at he start went a tad too fast.

That being said this was an awesome movie and deserves the awesome score that it has received.

Score: 5

"Very nice!"

submission: Flash Tutor: 4

date: June 2, 2006

I am always glad to see someone knowledgeble at Flash making a tutorial. This was good, the lesson clear as crystal.

Next time I would consider something other than sprites, and maybe animate your character a little better. OMG If you wanted to do a really good one you could have him say the text too.

Very nice I expect this to do well.