Age/Gender: 18, Male
Location: Toronto, ON
Job: Flash developer
If you can't video tape it, at least write a novel about it.
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157 Reviews | 49 w/ Responses
Love it. It lagged a lot, probably because of that thing in the background (but don't take it out, that is worth the lag). It was a bit hard to understand how to play at the start, but it was easy to figure out after a bit. Great job on the programming man, I saw you post that thread on the bbs about that I don't know what it is called in the background, loved it.
Great job.
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You can't take credit for the artwork if you traced it.
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This is great. I think you need to put some more effort into it, though. For example, there are only 5 levels. Make it minimum 15. Next, if I click and hold I can skip the whole thing. This is because you are using on (rollOver) { /**/ } instead of a shapeflag hitTest.
// on the walls
onClipEvent (mouseMove)
{
if (hitTest (_root._xmouse, _root._ymouse, true))
{
_root.die ();
}
}
// end code
That way, I cannot cheat. Or, just have it die on a mouseDown.
// on the walls
onClipEvent (mouseDown)
{
_root.die ();
}
// end code
Anyway, you did a fantastic job on the sounds, and it was really fun with all the characters and whatnot. Great job.
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It's very refreshing to see something so original like this. I loved the painting and art - very nice job on that. The animation was quite decent, but some parts had way too much tweening, and some parts (like one of the times when the father is looking down and looks up) requires at least 1 inbetween, without it it was too choppy.
Regardless, marvelous job.
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Wowowow, that's a lot of inbetweens. Wow. You must have nerves of steel. I hope everybody appreciates this as much as I do.
Great graphics, cool idea, original formatting. The downs are that it was a bit dry on the humor aspect - it wasn't really that funny, but still enjoyable, and also the sound quality was very poor. Still, it is worth a 10/10 for sure.
Great job mate.
Author's Response:
Nothing pleases me more than to have someone appreciate this for the same reasons I do, the animation. It does sting a bit to hear that it's not funny, but you can't please everybody with the same thing. Criticism on sound is nothing new to me. Yes, I suppose I do have nerves of steel (not to be compared with those found in our mighty hero, the star of this cartoon) but it does take a lot of hard work and dedication to cartoon this way. You either have to be really driven, or really nuts, and, well, in my case, it's the latter. Thanks again, and stay tuned, Episode 3 will have it all (I hope).
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I love this and the series, even though #2 cost me daily fifth for one of my cartoons >:( Great audio, I like the mac/windows music in the bg, I like the idea that it is totally biased, and I like the drawings and animation (but it could use a wee bit more char animation). I'm an atheist so I guess that's probably a bias on my part, but whatever XD It's good to be doing stuff like this, brave even, because it is obvious that non-atheists will vote it down, and that's a shame.
Good job.
Author's Response:
Thanks mate, glad you like the series, although credit where credit's due, Enoll did most of the work here.
I'm deeply, deeply sorry that I pipped you for fifth. I want you to know that if I could turn back time, I would.
Seems like you like a lot about this series, which means I like a lot about you. But I wouldn't call it brave, I don't really mind if people vote this stuff down, I don't think I'm offending anyone, and if people take it as offense then it's them misinterpreting harmless fun, and it's always going to happen.
Thanks for the review, I loved your Stand Up Comedy collab.
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Yeah that was flawless. Very nice FBF animation, loved the preloader, great sounds, it was all brilliant. You've got my 5.
Author's Response:
You got our gratitude :)
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This makes history. Best thing on Newgrounds. I don't know how you managed to create it without going crazy... I nearly go crazy on every episode of anything of decent size I make... let alone a 10 minute action sequence.
I mean seriously... pinnacle.
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Amazing! Absolutely flawless! I love when he's playing guitar with stuff.
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I found this brilliant. Great job on every aspect, I think the audio quality at the end wasn't up to par with the rest, but doesn't matter. Very underrated.
Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks, pal. I think it's underrated too. Come on everyone, overrate it -- NOW!
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