Could be better.
It is a refreshing look at what tutorials SHOULD look like, and it was good, but could be improved.
- Music
- The next/back buttons should always be in the same place, so you don't have to move your cursor every new frame
- At one point, the title changed colours for 1 frame for no reason
I didn't read the whole thing because I wouldn't benefit from it, but I am sure it was quality!
GOOD JOB!
Thank you, very kind.
If you'll try to look at why the title changes colour, you'll notice that this is always at the end of every chapter. Just as with the positions of the buttons, this was a little psychology test.
I might change it, at least the buttons will be changed, but it kind of feels good. Maybe if more people are bothered by it.
Thank you for your review.
I got to level 28 and got bored.
<a very challenging and unique game>
Graphics: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 |9| 10
<this is very sharp and modern>
Sound: |0| 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
<add a sound loop and you strongly deserve an overall 9>
Interactivity: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 |9| 10
<very nice game, but no save function>
Style: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 |9| 10
<a very unique game that I have never seen before, and totally brilliant>
Voilence: |0| 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
<no comment>
Humor: |0| 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
<no comment>
Overall: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 |8| 9 10
<you just need sound and a save function, but otherwise good job>
Nobody likes soundboards...
I recognize that you are new to Flash, and suggest you practise your Flash skills on something else, like cartoons.
:D
Flawed
Bad hitTest on the Flash files led to bad gameplay. Also, it was reppetitive and boring.
Ofcourse on the plus side it has astonishing graphics and style! A truely proffesional look that you should be proud of!
Very, very impressive
When I first played this I missed seeing the score, and I thought it would be around 4.3 or so, and I was very surprised to see a 3.6!!
This deserves much better, and I suppose the rising NG standards are to blame. I say keep up the good work - solid AS, solid design, moderate animation, and solid art!
GOOD WORK!!!
So much potential!
Seriously, you need a decent graphics designer, a good set of instructions and a bit better range of options, and this would be awesome!
Great job!
Reusage of fireworks
They were all the same firework, with dif colours or paired up. You need to create AS controlled explosions maybe. Or do a better job of drawing them. Also, this needs variety - dont reuse the same movieclip over and over - make a dif explosion for each one.
Also, u should make it so u click and the firework goes to that point - all this stuff isn't that hard to man.
good try though, u need to practise AS.
Umm... AS and design stolen?
Its provided by flash as a sample. if u have Flash MX 2002 - check into the Local Disk Drive > Program Files > Macromedia > Flash > Samples > fla > maze.fla.
That is the exact same thing, but better. this guy just opened that up and changed the maze. OBVIUSLY STOLEN!!! you get a zero every day i have the free time
n00b
Stick to using tutorials, not making them!
Unless you are exceptionaly good, don't make a freaking tutorial. You barely know a thing about Flash, you are bad at explaining things, this was utterly terrible. There is nothing about this tutorial that would ever come back to see, because it has been done before! You are so uncreative!
You score a 1 of 10, and a 0 of 5, because this was stupid, and some instructions were a bit off, and that isn't really how you make buttons... there's a WAY better way of doing it.
I don't think that this should've passed judgement, but since it did I guess you must be doing something right.
- Snubby
Top Score: 14105
Gotta get to school so I'll keep this short... great game! It is too easy, needs to get harder faster
Well, aint that the dickens!
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