Snubby's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[JerBer Introduction Video]

You should work on the timing/spacing of the animation to make the movements less rigid. If I were you I also wouldn't bother shading the character for now and just focus on the making the animation fluid.

Some of the drawings are blocky/awkward. You should probably use the paintbrush instead of line tools, you can still make the lines look clean and its a lot easier to use.

Grey background and grey shirt is a bit too dull.

Also you should make transparent buttons over the stuff where annotation buttons would be.

See lots of potential, keep it up!

JerBer7 responds:

Thanks for the comment and the criticism, it's very much needed. I'll try to use the brush tool more, I like the way it looks more than the line tool anyway. Hopefully when my next few videos come out, you'll give me more insight!

[Mike's Cat]

Loved it

Really enjoyed this, thought it was funny and well animated.

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I really enjoyed your comment

[Funny School Things 2]

Nice

I like how you don't have the best skills but you put in a lot of effort. Also, good idea.

Aqlex responds:

Thanks =). That's how I hope to improve: lots of effort and practice.

[Rantdog's Drug Test]

Nice

Liked the unique camera angles, and good art/anim. You should work on getting a decent preloader, or at least put the NG preloader over the first frame or something.

PS. Credits look REALLY professional lol

Rantdog responds:

Thxs Snubby.

[LARRY episode 1]

Great Art

I don't know myan, if it turns out that kid actually is the chosen one then that whole necrophiliac thing won't make any sense unless it shows him getting with dead people regularly. You don't just stop being a necrophiliac overnight. This is a very serious plot hole.

Jazza responds:

LOL not really. if you took all the flashbacks in family guy seriously then the series is completely redundant and senseless... which it is anyway. point is, its a cartoon, it doesnt matter :)

[Me and my Imaginations]

Nice

Keep at it man!

d8b responds:

Thanks, from the creator of my inspiration himself! (:

[Madness: Bar Brawl]

Great

Awesome, probably one of the best fight scenes ever animated in flash. Really great cartoon.

And holy shit, when are you guys going to get a break. Nogfish must be the most underrated artist on NG.

Nogfish responds:

:D haha I'm glad you think so dude

[<3 AVA]

*barfs*

yuck. great animation, nice choice of music.

chaos-warrior responds:

ha, thanks there.

[The One Layer Collab]

not even 1 layer

sorry.... the only thing this had to offer was the one layer concept which wasn't even true. animated graphics were used obviously and then placed in one layer on the main timeline.... any movie can be one layer like that. how could you tween some things on the timeline but not other without doing that.... sorry, not one layer at all.

MarcyVF responds:

GIVE ME YOUR MAIL AND NAME THE PART AND I'LL SEND IT TO YOU! Stop underrating.

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[HIT THAT!]

Awesome

Thanks man, thanks a lot. Glad you liked my movie. Yours is very funny as well.

<3

Cambo responds:

Absolutely welcome mate. You guys down there have a good thing going, I'm a big fan of "Pedophile" too.