That wasn't right.
Tracing weapons isn't okay. Just tracing everything shows no artistic talent, and makes for very, very bad movies / games.
Teaching people to trace is like teaching people to steal and should not be in a tutorial.
That wasn't right.
Tracing weapons isn't okay. Just tracing everything shows no artistic talent, and makes for very, very bad movies / games.
Teaching people to trace is like teaching people to steal and should not be in a tutorial.
i guess, i'm just trying to stop people from drawing crap weapons like i have seen in so many movies before
Wow Intense
That was great it reminded me of that birthday cartoon Luis made.
GOOD:
- Preloader sufficient
- Nice build up to the actual brawl
- Fighting was amazing
- Good ending
- Nice tweening+FBF combo
- Good animation and Graphics All around.
BAD:
- SMALL bit of lagg
- No dialogue (but that doesn't really matter)
- The one closeup scene during the brawl was lower quality than the rest.
Thats it. GOOD JOB!!!
SPECTACULAR!
This submission opened my eyes to how good 3D animation really can be.
GOOD:
- Solid 3D animation, and great animation all around.
- Great sounds.
- Nice preloader it ran smooth.
- So fun, with all the action.
BAD:
- PLZ CORRECT ME IF I'M WRONG, but I those were rotoscopes (I think).
- Newgrounds is an English site, so I would have prefferred English music.
- The text at he start went a tad too fast.
That being said this was an awesome movie and deserves the awesome score that it has received.
Very nice!
I am always glad to see someone knowledgeble at Flash making a tutorial. This was good, the lesson clear as crystal.
Next time I would consider something other than sprites, and maybe animate your character a little better. OMG If you wanted to do a really good one you could have him say the text too.
Very nice I expect this to do well.
Very nice.
Dude, you can't teach timing and spacing without having a ball bounce... that's the best example anybody could possibly ask for.
Lol good tutorial all stuff I know but that'll do some good to somebody.
That sure was original...
...I have never seen anything like it! Truely genious...
You used a total of two colours - black and white. Very well thought out.
You animated a 'fbf' movie using a low fps (12?).
You submitted a crappy entry that was only worked on for a laughable 6 hours.
Your entry was disgracful - 'fbf advanced'. Wtf is that?! FBF isn't just some meaningless paintbrush strokes on a white canvas. No. FBF is oldschool animation. Watch some Buggs Bunny, thats FBF. You create a character, write a story, and animate such movements as opening a door by drawing the first and last frames and filling in the inbetweens.
That is just terrible. Do not ever submit anything similar to that ever again.
Nice Sarcasm In the Beggining...
I think...
and I will remmeber to do better...
Mouthing!!
Wonchop, Wonchop, Wonchop... don't be lazy. Do propor lip sync. It would make it so much better.
Also, though hard to animate, at least make an attempt to show the fight insteas of a white screen with text. I know its supposed to be funny but hell, a fight scene'd be much funnier - worth the Hard Work!
Also, it may be your style but i'd say stay away from pictures - like photos - and also get a lil better range of movement.
Like I said, I had 2 days to do this. Plus my computer was being stupid.
This was just some silly thing for my friends birthday. Proper lip sync is probably best saved for the longer stuff.
Well, aint that the dickens!
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