Eh....
It was pretty funny, really funny- especially the fight club reference. I think you need to work on the graphics though.
Eh....
It was pretty funny, really funny- especially the fight club reference. I think you need to work on the graphics though.
Brilliant!
I love the way you write these things. You are very talented, but the problem is the art. Some scenes are good, but some other scenes are prominently lacking. Just keep the quality going smooth the whole way, and it'll be a lot better.
This isn't really about the art though, it's about the writing. You get a 9
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Great!
That was great! You didn't have to be THAT hard on her, but it was very funny nonetheless. I loved the graphics, scripter, preloader, everything. I animated a character similar to the one you have there, so I know what it's like (I had to make him walk though). Anyway, good job!
8 - 8.5
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I watch this religously, amazing job! Very ren and stimpy.
WOW!
That was truely brilliant! I LOVED it!
GOOD:
- Great preloader
- No color, but it worked
- AMAZING writing
- some good animation
- great depth and feel
- so funny
- really cliche, but in a good way
- good music and story
BAD:
- some crappy, tweened animation. I'm not complaining though.
- Some bits were a bit off, like some seemed a bit silly. Well, only one really, the guy at the end playing with his hands. That writing was par.
- they could use a better character design
- Could use some better lip sync.
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GREAT JOB - TRUELY INSPIRING!
Great work!
That was great, it's good to see some people who actually try to produce quality character animation. Those blurry scenes with the lack of detail were crappy, I'd change um. Other than that, the story was great, and I loved it!
thumidy uppidy.
Gladily tha u likely!
Needs polishing...
Hey frozensheep, nice to see you finished it up. It was pretty good, but lots of things wrong.
BAD:
- The animation wasn't fluid - too choppy - and it had too much tweening.
- The sound quality was too low.
- The use of traced bitmaps was bad
- Some scenes were much better than others.
- Bad back button at the end / ending screen
GOOD:
- Some animation was par
- Funny stuff
- Pretty good length
Good job, but could be better.
thanks for the tip about the back button.
Well, aint that the dickens!
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