Above Par for a sprite
You seem talented, and you really should venture into the world of vectors. Sprites are crap. Anyways...
GOOD:
- Very nice custom tweening
- Storyline good
- Lengthly
- Engaging
- Nice fight scenes
- Nice font
BAD:
- 'Utilize' is run off of word, 'Use'. Don't say utilize, it is only good in rare, rare occasions. Every single time you wrote Utilize, you should have written 'Use'.
- SPRITES!!!
- You mixed vectors with sprites.
- No voices, just writing
- Poor buttons, try adding some transparency, like a 0-Alpha white square behind the button (nested within it of course), and they'll be easier to click!
Good job, a solid 8.